I had to write a poem for english. I chose to do it on weed and getting high. Tell me what you think of it? What should i change?
Dazed and Down to Earth
It fills my mouth and explodes.
Triggers a tornado, rain follows;
It’s not something I’ll get used to.
The godly flavor slithers,
Surrounds me with a delightful numbness.
The yellow comes and goes,
Leaves me feeling mellow,
As heat crawls down my throat.
Every blink is a comma,
Every move is amnesia.
My senses let go. So unreliable.
I spot your smirk between syndromes.
Hold your gaze for a century.
And two seconds from eternity,
My voice disrupts me.
We float on like it means nothing.
Go on like it proves something.
It’s erratic. I ******* love it.
Then you land somewhere nice
But the clouds keep me hostage.
So I fly solo for a year or so.
Keep myself busy,
Rewriting history with a new philosophy,
While my mind is on a leave of absence
I crash into reality,
Far from this mentality
The mellow goes, feelings show,
The flavor fades, I lose the haze.
Loathing the way life does this
I ignite the feeling,
Breathe, slip and drown in bliss.
2007-11-16
16:31:12
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