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"twisted love"
walking through this neighborhood with the beloved
so sweet dreams, so proud, so moved
we made envys in the spring of dove
oh! they called it "a shakespearean love"
blossoming with flowers in the quiet evening
in the affair of hearts, the words of giving
tears of joy when we were shared
the swear of life after life to be paired
hurt in love? yes, took me from home to street
wandering nights, hiding days try not to meet
the same neighbors showed hatred once so near
planting the flower of love, forever, faraway o' dear?
Chet Raj Gurung
2007-08-26
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