This poem is about my good close friend moved yesterday...=/ im really sad so i wrote this i need your honest opinion and do you think this poem is deep?
You told me your moving miles away
Left me speechless with nothing to say
Didn’t want to get hurt, so I tried to drift away
I was scared. It was like I was trapped in the dark.
You began to notice & you asked why I've been ignoring you.
I knew I was, but I denied your question & responded "I'm not."
I tried to act so cold like I didn't even care,
And made it as if she was a stranger; someone I had never seen or met before.
But the pain grows stronger each day like being shot over and over.
Time passes by, and it seems like we're not talking.
But I thought about all the times we've had.
And I thought about the way we used to talk, we shared so many deep thoughts,
And laughs, and now we're sharing tears.
I can't ask what happened
Knowing it was my fault
For distancing myself when we should have been closer
2007-06-23
22:36:18
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