I wrote this today, in about ten or seven minutes, and I'm twelve and in seventh grade.
Look into your heart.
See all the darkness and hate within?
Look into your heart, and
Think, think.
Look into your soul.
See all the wrong you have done?
Look into your soul, and
Think, think.
If the heart nor the soul
Makes us good and sweet,
Nor horrid and evil,
What does?
Think, think.
Our mind!
There is no such thing
As a hard heart, or
An unclean soul.
Look into your mind and
Think, think.
Look into your mind.
See all the horrible things you have done?
They were not from your hard heart,
Nor your unclean soul.
They were from your own decisions.
So next time,
Look into your mind and
Think, think.
Could some people tell me what they really think about this, or give me some constructive critisism, or tips? Thank you!
2006-09-28
12:57:26
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Supernova
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