i know it isnt that great, but ive never written one before. i at least tried to be as formal as possible and i watched for spelling and grammar errors. what could i do to improve it? oh yeah, ive removed certain details for obvious reasons
To whom it may concern,
My name is (blank), I am a 17 year old student at Blank Highschool, and I am interested in applying for your part time position a a photographer. While I have no formal work experience, I have taken an ROP class in photography during my junior year. I am very hands on, work very well with people, I have a willingness to learn, and I have no problems following instructions. If interested, my home number is (111)111-1111, and my email is spitfire_zzz2001@yahoo.ca
Sincerely,
(blank)
2007-08-25
08:36:30
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