i wrote this poem for my first true love, is it good? any suggestions?
I met a girl, not long ago
She was sweet, I loved her so
I thought for a while then moved my feet
Maybe our love was never to be
A few days passed, I talked to her
I was friendly; I began to think, sure
I really like her, she might like me
Then I decided to ask her out finally
I was nervous, but then she said ok
We went to the movie, it ended the day.
We both went home, and went to sleep
This is a love I want to keep.
2007-02-23
09:14:07
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