A candle flickering in the darkness
One; just a single candle,
The image of his face
disappearing, fading away
from my sight
and I'm left all alone
again, as always
it seems that it's true,
I guess it is my fate after all
to be alone, neglected, invisible from everyone else
How I wish this feeling would go away,
This feeling of hatre and pain
Whym why can' tI be engulfed by this darkness?
Is it my destiny
to wander in this infernal world
to live on forever, all eternity
watching
as everyone else goes
leaving me here
eventually I'll forget
my existence, my purpose, everything...
Wait- what is my purpose
I don't even know
How I wish to leave this damnation
Get out escape
Somehow I will
I know I will
All but one question left
When?
And I rise as the darkness nears me once more...
----it's supposed a point of view poem
but i don't know what to do,
so that's just something out of my head
help me please??
advice, editing, anything?
2007-02-25
08:46:09
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7 answers
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cherry
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