This is just the beginning of chapter1:
The day was dark and dismal, with the sky pale and empty, as if worn out from the laborious temper from the night before; and the naked trees shivering from the callous wind which swept by them, and across the waste of muddy fields.
‘I’m not an impulsive man,’ he reflected, ‘so damn my soul if I know what I’m doing.’ The gentleman could not understand what force had rendered him to thoughtlessly walk into the cold lake on espying a dark shadow floating above the water in the shrouded distance. He was a man of facts. And the fact was that he expected to find a log, a heap of garbage, or something of that reasonable sort. The fact was he had not expected to find the lone corpse of a young woman floating above the water like an abandoned rag doll.
......Was it alright??Or should I fix it some how??
2006-11-21
16:07:24
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