i have a new poem. tell me:
if you like it
what you think its about
if it sucks or its good
best answer gets 10 pts tomorrow
possibly a poem or lyrics of yours!!
“Perfect Stranger”
As the years passes I had no idea what I would miss.
There was no warning that it would ever come to this.
Looking back, I would have never guessed you’d be gone.
From then to now changed like dusk to dawn.
I now have pain no medicine can fix.
No where to hide, I know all of your tricks.
Looking back it’s still surprising.
As I am sinking, you are slowly rising.
Adolescence is a silent killer that can slip through your mind.
Thought you had everything, but you were stole completely blind.
Someone so close to you, changed so rapidly, so confused.
Trusted them with all your heart and all you got was bruised.
It is out of my hands now, I give him to you, watch over him tonight.
I want to be there, but all I can do is pray everything will be alright.
How can you love someone so much and they push you away;
Like you are nothing but a mannequin on an utter display?
Often times when I think of you and wish I could be there.
So much has happened, so many memories shared.
Reminiscing through old pictures and knick-knacks always makes me cry.
So hard I have tried to understand, and still I don’t know why.
Someone so close can be so far away in such a quick flash.
Like something with no significance than a dirty piece of trash.
I wonder if I ever come to your mind, how I feel.
No matter the time that may pass, this will never seem real.
2007-07-03
10:46:47
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