i'm a chinese.Resently, I need to give a presentation in class, i want sb to help me to check out if there is any mistake in the fllowing statement,and if possible, please change it , so it seem more like oral English. thanks a lot :
From the year 994, Svein ,the king of Denmark, invaded England again. Although the English people paid the Danes a lot of dane-geld, in order to keep the invaders away . But the Danes never went .(introduce dane-geld)
In 1013, Svein launch a great attack to the Anglo-Saxons. The next year ,he had took control of most of England, and became the ruler . However, he died in the same year.
In 1016, England is divided into two parts. One part was control by the Danes, and the other by the Anglo-Saxon. Canute ,(1016-35) the son of Sevin, reached a agreement with the Wessex king. In this agreement., the Anglo-Saxon king promised that if one of them died , the other would control the hole country. unfortunatly, the wessex king died. shortly afterward
2006-10-05
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