is this poem correct? i wrote it, i am 13 and just any changes i can do:
A LITTLE PATRIOT'S PRAYER
When our whole world changed
on that day in september, the president
said something that i'll always remember.
he asked our country to pray.
so pray, i did.
because prayers have power.
even prayers from a kid.
So i pray, lord,
for the president,
Thathe'll do what is right.
i pray for our armed forces.
keep them safe as they fight,
Let your will be done through the world,
so this evil will cease,
so we can grow up,
and still have a world of
love, hope and peace
Amen!
2007-03-08
03:09:54
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