The assignment is to find a way to give insight into your life in under 100 words. I wasn’t sure if this was good enough, so I want to hear what you guys think. Is it good? Is it bad? Too choppy? Clear? Convuluted? Do you get the message, or is it obscure? What can I do to make this better?
Two years ago, the first acquaintance I made at my new school was a rock. Being myself, I didn’t know what to make of people. I’d kick a rock around instead. It was simple, I didn’t have to guess what it meant. One year ago, I met somebody on the bus. He asked questions, told jokes and seemed mildly enthusiastic. I was skeptical. Once he asked if I thought he was making fun of me. I didn’t know how to respond. “I don’t do that kind of stuff,” he reassured me. It seemed pretty simple, despite all my guesswork.
2007-12-28
11:39:48
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