I'm a Chinese and the teacher told us to write an english diary, so I'm wondering can you plzzzzzzzzzzzz help me? Use your way of writing my diary or check if is there any grammar , spelling , phrase that is wrong! I can give you 10 points if you did a good job! You can change or add many dificult or funny words in my diary, make my diary more interesting, make my diary sound more like Americans.(I'm in 7th grade now)
Dear Diary,
Today, I was woken up by my indignant mom, knonking at my door. I glanced at my alarm clock, I knew that I had overslept. I splashed cold water on my face before getting dressed. I was tired and sleepy, cause I stayed up almost all night. When I got to school, I ignore my frineds, Christina and Naiomi, I was too tired to pay attention to them. For the whole day, I was imagining how cool of me being a spy and working for the MI6.
2006-09-01
20:13:02
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