The assignment is to create a paragraph comparing the greta purge and animal farm, Please read this and tell me if anything is wrong or if there is something that would sound better if it were changed. Thanks in advance for the help. ( the topic sentence MUST be used so it cant be changed )
'Chapter seven of Animal Farm is an allegory of Stalin’s Great Purge. First of all, both were lead by dictators who used “secret police” to gain control of society. For example, Joseph Stalin was a dictator in Great Purge who used the KGB ( secret police ) to control those under him. Similarly, Napoleon is a dictator in the Animal Farm Revolution who used dogs to maintain the order of his people...... (rest in additional details)
2007-01-31
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