I'm a Chinese (7th grade) and the teacher told us to write an English diary, so I'm wondering can you please help me? Use your way of writing my diary or check if is there any grammar, spelling, phrase that is wrong! I can give you 10 points if u did a good job! You can change or add many difficult or funny words in my diary, make my diary more interesting, and make my diary sound more like Americans.
Dear Diary,
My friend Alicia had called my today. She told me that he family was going a trip for two days, and asked me is I wanted to come along. I hesitated for a moment, it’s only a trip for two days, and how bad could it be? I said yes and then hung up the phone. When I started packing up my luggage, I tried to think if I had made the right decision. Ten minutes later, Debra’s family had picked me up. When I went in the car, I saw Alex in the back of the seat. “Alex?” I gasped surprisingly. I just knew Alicia would invite Alex. “So, were are we going?”
2006-09-02
21:02:11
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