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Ghetto College
Is this is the lasttest ghetto college you want to get your education? I will let you decide. Victor Valley College (VVC) makes many students feel like they getting theirs education in a ghetto college. Classes are over filled with students, not enough of parking spaces for students cars, some of the classes are only teached once in two years.
Classes at VVC are over filled with students. For example being in over filled class with students, you don’t get enough attention from teachers. From not getting enough attention on theirs class work and homework problems from teachers, they score low on theirs quizzes and tests. Some of the students stay after class to get help from teacher and students don’t get enough help anyways because teachers are already ware out by teaching over filled classes. Students are not blaming teachers for not giving them enough help, attention, there are actually blaming VVC for providing them with over filled classes. Many students just don’t understand why VVC isn’t doing anything with over filled classes; it’s not like there is not enough classrooms, if college committee wanted to solve this problem they would, just by hiring new teachers. By hiring new teachers classes will not be that over filled, there for students will get more attention from teachers and its also will be easier for teachers to teach smaller classes. For one thing being in over filled classes, is that there is not enough seats for students so if you want to sit on the chair you have to come fifteen minutes early to class to take a seat, and the rest of the students who come later they take sits on the floor. And let me tell you it is uncomfortable and painful to sit on the floor for two whole hours. Many students can’t get fifteen minutes early to class of the parking problems.
Students suffer of not having enough parking lots on VVC property. For example some of the students have to get twenty minutes early to college; to find a parking lot close to there’s class. For instance if students wont find any parking lots on the college’s property, then students park there’s cars out side VVC and walk about for twenty minutes to theirs class. Few of the teachers on the campus luck there doors the minute the class starts, so that students who are late to would interrupt the class. As I said before if a door is locked the only thing you can do is turn around and walk away, don’t knock or else you will be yelled by the teacher and kicked out of the class anyways. You can fail this class really easy just by getting late there three times, that’s why students in that class get twenty minutes early to college is to find a parking lot. The good thing is that this biology class is teached every semester so if you fail it, you can always retake it next semester, there is few of the classes are only teached once in two years.
Students complain about VVC teaching some of the classes only once in two years. In other words students that took all the classes that they needed for there’s major accept the class that VVC teaches only once in two years. Students have to wait for that class form one to four semesters it depends how close they are to that semester that VVC teaches that class. For one thing there is only two options for students to make, they can wait for the semester that VVC teaches the class or they just can go to another close by college which is fifty miles from Victor Valley area and take class there. Generally you decide to take that class that you needed at VVC, you took that class and next thing you know you fail it because of the teacher that hates those students who get late to her class, and its basically not your fault and VVC fault that it couldn’t provide you with a parkings. Definitely you left with one choice is to go to another college and take that class there, because I don’t thing that you would like to wait for that class for another two years and get the same teacher.
Now its up to you to decide if it worth it to go to VVC. Get you education trough parking problems, with over filled classes with students, and classes that only teached once in two years.
2006-10-16
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