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help me to fix my essay... fix my grammer mistakes if you see any ..... add to this essay what you thing will make it sound good.

Ghetto College
Is this is the lasttest ghetto college you want to get your education? I will let you decide. Victor Valley College (VVC) makes many students feel like they getting theirs education in a ghetto college. Classes are over filled with students, not enough of parking spaces for students cars, some of the classes are only teached once in two years.
Classes at VVC are over filled with students. For example being in over filled class with students, you don’t get enough attention from teachers. From not getting enough attention on theirs class work and homework problems from teachers, they score low on theirs quizzes and tests. Some of the students stay after class to get help from teacher and students don’t get enough help anyways because teachers are already ware out by teaching over filled classes. Students are not blaming teachers for not giving them enough help, attention, there are actually blaming VVC for providing them with over filled classes. Many students just don’t understand why VVC isn’t doing anything with over filled classes; it’s not like there is not enough classrooms, if college committee wanted to solve this problem they would, just by hiring new teachers. By hiring new teachers classes will not be that over filled, there for students will get more attention from teachers and its also will be easier for teachers to teach smaller classes. For one thing being in over filled classes, is that there is not enough seats for students so if you want to sit on the chair you have to come fifteen minutes early to class to take a seat, and the rest of the students who come later they take sits on the floor. And let me tell you it is uncomfortable and painful to sit on the floor for two whole hours. Many students can’t get fifteen minutes early to class of the parking problems.
Students suffer of not having enough parking lots on VVC property. For example some of the students have to get twenty minutes early to college; to find a parking lot close to there’s class. For instance if students wont find any parking lots on the college’s property, then students park there’s cars out side VVC and walk about for twenty minutes to theirs class. Few of the teachers on the campus luck there doors the minute the class starts, so that students who are late to would interrupt the class. As I said before if a door is locked the only thing you can do is turn around and walk away, don’t knock or else you will be yelled by the teacher and kicked out of the class anyways. You can fail this class really easy just by getting late there three times, that’s why students in that class get twenty minutes early to college is to find a parking lot. The good thing is that this biology class is teached every semester so if you fail it, you can always retake it next semester, there is few of the classes are only teached once in two years.
Students complain about VVC teaching some of the classes only once in two years. In other words students that took all the classes that they needed for there’s major accept the class that VVC teaches only once in two years. Students have to wait for that class form one to four semesters it depends how close they are to that semester that VVC teaches that class. For one thing there is only two options for students to make, they can wait for the semester that VVC teaches the class or they just can go to another close by college which is fifty miles from Victor Valley area and take class there. Generally you decide to take that class that you needed at VVC, you took that class and next thing you know you fail it because of the teacher that hates those students who get late to her class, and its basically not your fault and VVC fault that it couldn’t provide you with a parkings. Definitely you left with one choice is to go to another college and take that class there, because I don’t thing that you would like to wait for that class for another two years and get the same teacher.
Now its up to you to decide if it worth it to go to VVC. Get you education trough parking problems, with over filled classes with students, and classes that only teached once in two years.

Answer 1

I DECIDED TO HELP YOU!!!!

I got bored at work, so here you go. I retyped it for you. I hope it helps!


Ghetto College

Is this the college in which you’d want an education? I will let you decide. Victor Valley College (VVC) makes its students feel like they are attending a ghetto college. Classes are over filled, there are not enough parking spaces for students and some classes are only taught once in two years.

Classes at VVC are over crowded. For example; being in an over filled classroom makes it difficult for one on one attention from the teachers. Because of this lack of student/teacher interaction, many students score unusually low on their tests and quizzes. Some of the students try to stay after class to get help from the teacher but the teachers seem to be worn out from handling such a large class. Students, however, are not blaming the teachers for not giving them enough help and attention. They are actually blaming VVC for providing them with these overflowing classes. Many students just don’t understand why VVC isn’t doing anything with this problem. There are plenty of classrooms, but that is not the problem. If the college committee wanted to solve this problem they could. Hiring new teachers is an option. By hiring new teachers, classes would reduce in size and allow the teacher the opportunity for much needed one on one interaction with the students.

Due to the over crowded classrooms; one must arrive at least 15 minutes early to secure a chair. Those students who arrive any later end up sitting on the floor. And let me tell you, it is uncomfortable and painful to sit on the floor for two hours. It is difficult for many students to get to class 15 minutes early due to the parking problems. Students suffer from this lack of parking lots on VVC property. For example; some of the students have to arrive on campus twenty minutes early to find a parking spot anywhere close to there classroom. Students who are unable to find a parking space on the college’s property must park their cars out side the campus grounds and walk nearly twenty minutes to their class. Many teachers on the campus lock their doors the minute class starts so that those students, who are late, disrupt the class. As I said before, if a door is locked the only thing you can do is turn around and walk away! They don’t dare knock or else they will be yelled at by the teacher and asked to leave the class. It is possible to fail this class just by arriving late a total of three times. That is why it is necessary for many students to arrive unusually early. The Biology class, however, is taught every semester so if you do happen to fail it, you can always retake it. The downside to that is that there are several of the classes that are only taught once in two years.

Several students have complained about the fact that VVC only teaches several classes once every two years. In other words, many students that took the classes they needed for their major were unable to complete the required courses. Students have to wait for that class between one to four semesters. There are only two options for students to make: first, they can wait for that specific semester in which the college teaches the class or they have the undesirable option go to another college fifty miles from the Victor Valley. Generally it is decided to take that class that you needed at VVC. Having taken, and completed the course, you find that you have failed due to the inability to arrive on time due to the parking issue. It’s a vicious circle. You are then left with your second option; attend the other college fifty miles away and attend that class. It’s either that, or postpone your progression by waiting for that class another two years and get the same teacher.

Now it’s up to you to decide if it worth it to go to VVC. Try to get your education with parking problems, over filled classrooms, and classes that are only taught once in two years.

Answer 2

It is much to long. You need to correct your spelling! Classes are only thought once in two years. (not teached). There must be something worthwhile in this Victor Valley College. This leaves one under the impression that there is nothing in this College worth attending. This is my critique, in order to improve it some. You may take it or leave it. It is entirely negative the way you have it now, is that the way you have intended it to be and stay?

Answer 3

Perfect - no mistakes. Now gimme 10

Answer 4

dang, turn on the grammar check and the spell check let the computer/software do that bovine fecal matter for you.

Answer 5

Nobody have a time to read this.


Bye for now gud nite.

Answer 6

Well, for one - paragraphs are your friend. Don't make your teacher's eyes bleed.

Answer 7

No. Do your own homework and learn to spell.

Answer 8

well for starters sorrry but it is too long. it looks good though. but thats w/o reading it

Answer 9

who would fix this it is way to long