im doing a formal memo and i need comments on two sentences.
my friend help me out with these two sentences:
"First, the condo office told me that there was no water damages and then changed their mind and charge me for the water damage?" and "If there was damage to unit #202 why was I not inform before they ask Terry to repair it?".
the first sentence sounds bad and but i dont know how to fix it.
the second sentence, i was thinking to change it to: " If there were damages to unit #202, why wasn't I informed before they asked Terry to repair them.". what do u guys think?
gimme some feedback plz
2006-09-26
11:24:32
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