I am applying for college and I was wondering if someone could possibly help me? I am really bad at grammar and English and I had to state the reason why I was applying to the specific college and I did. I was just wondering if someone could tell me what I needed to fix, it is just a real short paragragh. Thank you so much if you can help, I really appreciate it. I can't get a hold of anyone who can do it for me.
Thiel College is not only the perfectly sized college for my needs, it is also a private Liberal Arts college, which is exactly what I am looking for. The college fits my academic necessities, such as its defined chemistry program, wireless campus, and the opportunity to buy inexpensive books. I was also very impressed by the friendly atmosphere I encountered during my visit to Thiel, and the college itself was very well taken care of, to say the least. All in all, Thiel was a wonderful experience and is a college that I will be looking into further.
2006-08-23
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