I see a lot of classicaly applauded poetry and I see a lot written by internet hacks and I honestly can't tell the difference. For fun - I'll post two poems here - were they written by poets or hacks?
I swallowed my words twenty weeks ago,
A web so well-woven,
I circled the edges,
amazed at how you survived.
I laughed and I cried,
and you'll never know.
Today I smile when I see your picture -
and I feel all the love of a friend.
Tomorrow, forgotten, another arisen,
The end of the cycle,
The start of the circle,
I'm swallowing words once again.
2006-12-11
10:28:01
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demnity
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