so what do u think?i wrote this poem for a girl. i'm from a non-English country so pls don't be too harsh (just kidding: gimme ur best shot).she refused... but now I know it was better this way... it was just a crush... still... this is it:
As u awoke my eyes with the light of your view,
Cause for me this feeling is almost like new,
This love began as a mistery
Crossing the border between u and me,
The light of your soul embraced my heart, not giving it hope but braking it apart,
My faded dreams began to live and from the top of the elbow to the end of the sleeve,
A shiver emerged with the speed of light,
Crossing the border between day and night.
And as the day misses its night,
As the sun misses its bright,
As the sea misses its waves,
As an army misses its braves
And as time misses the hours,
As the land misses the flowers,
I miss u every day u are
Not around me, but more ... far.
I'd want to be from all the guys
The one behind your hazel eyes.
2006-07-31
03:01:19
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