Here's a poem I wrote....honest (but respectful and SERIOUS) opinions please? I know it doesn't make a ton of sense but that's how it's meant to be to a certain degree. I'm almost 15 so don't expect it to be perfect.
Con[Temporary]
Cons outweigh the pros, haven't you heard?
In a flash the tried and true loses worth.
A single depicts the rise and fall of this empire,
But that's your aftermath for playing with fire.
You're just a filler song, downgraded by jet lag,
No need to win her over, she's temporarily stag.
Just mind the one-up king with what's up his sleeve,
The plague of absence seems to be rinsing you clean.
Backtrack now, who's hopeless and who's devoted?
You bluntly embellished it off, now dually noted.
He's the brains of the operation with smarts on parade,
You're meek with temptations and so likely to stray.
Costume design is primo, sans these complimentary wits.
Wherefore art thy postponing when the shoe doesn't fit?
2007-02-02
11:16:37
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