My story,set in the year 1799,is about a youn lady (Emily) who is poor in America.When her parents die,she becomes the warden of a kindof wealthy Aunt in England.Emily,who hated poverty because she experience many tragic events in her impovrished life,and was never really accepted by her peers,starts to like her new upper-class life.But slowly,it changes her view in life in a rather negative way (ex.Appearance comes before character.Money before love) and starts caging her,turning her into an artificial doll (as many upper-class people are).But then she meets a gypsy and she's attracted to him because he reminds her of the life she ONCE led.But in the end,the gypsy asks her to elope,but she rejects,because society has changed her from a romantic to a realist, and in reality, she knows that he can't offer her the comfort her AUNt can offer her.
Can you make this plot anymore interesting? or is it fine as it is? And have more phsycology to it?
2006-09-08
16:31:42
·
9 answers
·
asked by
J.Welkin
1
in
Psychology