It needs to be very descriptive and please make it long as well!
Please use simile and methapor and oxymoron and all of those "effective writing" stuff!
For example:
"Bottom of the ninth, two men on, two out, the score is tied. With the crack of the bat and the soft thud of a hardball settling into a leather glove, the game goes to extra innings"
or like
"beads of sweat dripping from their faces...children with smudges of ice cream on their faces"
2007-03-28
13:31:31
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Renzel
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