i really need help w/ my poem. i dunno much stuff about pro poems. i'm just 12!
Is this poem good?
She’s just leaning over there,
Alone in the crowd,
As they keep on pushing her around.
‘It hurts so bad’ she whispers.
Maybe she doubt her too much.
She had noone to be with,
Because she never had the courage
To speak up for herself.
‘Why me?’
They never payed any respect
She deserved.
She always cared
But they never did.
Inside she’s crying,
Outside she’s smiling,
Like nothing’s happening.
But there was a lot going on.
‘Will they understand?’
Maybe she doubt her too much.
She had noone to be with
Because she never had the courage
To speak up for herself.
She thinks there’s no point to live.
But there is,
Maybe she just had to look for it.
And she goes off, not knowing what will happen.
‘I guess it’s this hard.’
Then, she found someone,
Someone so dear and precious.
She promised herself never to let go.
But he didn’t feel the same way.
2007-02-04
12:00:04
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