this poem good?

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i really need help w/ my poem. i dunno much stuff about pro poems. i'm just 12!

Is this poem good?
She’s just leaning over there,
Alone in the crowd,
As they keep on pushing her around.
‘It hurts so bad’ she whispers.

Maybe she doubt her too much.
She had noone to be with,
Because she never had the courage
To speak up for herself.

‘Why me?’

They never payed any respect
She deserved.
She always cared
But they never did.

Inside she’s crying,
Outside she’s smiling,
Like nothing’s happening.
But there was a lot going on.

‘Will they understand?’

Maybe she doubt her too much.
She had noone to be with
Because she never had the courage
To speak up for herself.

She thinks there’s no point to live.
But there is,
Maybe she just had to look for it.
And she goes off, not knowing what will happen.

‘I guess it’s this hard.’

Then, she found someone,
Someone so dear and precious.
She promised herself never to let go.
But he didn’t feel the same way.

‘Why me?’

After that,
She was always hiding and crying
She doubt herself too much
And she just disappeared silently

She was gone,
As if she were never there,
They wondered where she went,
Noone knew.

‘Soon, they will.’

They hurt her so bad,
Noone knew.
She would never forgive them, ever.
As she would never forgive herself.

They found her little quiet small diary in her bag.
‘It hurt so bad
Inside I was crying
Outside I was smiling
Like nothing’s happening
There was more to that than a small innocent smile
Behind that smile was everything noone would understand.’

They read on,
Knowing it was their fault
But she would never forgive them
As she would never forgive herself.

P.S. i really need help. this category is where most people r. sori if this is not where it should be,

Answer 1

I think that you are very talented. Your words are so wonderful and expressive! I have been a writer all my life and I think you are very special and have a promising future if you keep on with the writing!! Good Luck!!

Answer 2

rlly awesome!