please read this and let me know what you think.. please?
I am a teenage girl. I wrote this poem. I entered it into a few poerty contests... do u think i have a shot at being a semi - finalist? do u like it?? let me know! Thanks!
Time
Your picture is above my bed.
You are the last thing I think about before I fall asleep.
I can't help thinking about you.
Our friendship is no longer, which brings tears to my eyes.
For you are the only one that really ever had my heart.
I must close the door on yesterday, for it is time.
Time that may one day, come back to the future.
Good byes mean forever.
See you later means that one day, time will bring us together again.
I am no longer bitter, for what we had was good in it's time.
No matter how much time passes before our reunion, I will always be concerned about you.
No amount of time can change that.
I look forward to the day, that I can call you my friend.
So no matter what, see you later, forever.
2006-09-26
18:25:53
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