please read this and let me know what you think.. please?
I am a teenage girl. I wrote this poem. I entered it into a few poerty contests... do u think i have a shot at being a semi - finalist? do u like it?? let me know! Thanks!
Time
Your picture is above my bed.
You are the last thing I think about before I fall asleep.
I can't help thinking about you.
Our friendship is no longer, which brings tears to my eyes.
For you are the only one that really ever had my heart.
I must close the door on yesterday, for it is time.
Time that may one day, come back to the future.
Good byes mean forever.
See you later means that one day, time will bring us together again.
I am no longer bitter, for what we had was good in it's time.
No matter how much time passes before our reunion, I will always be concerned about you.
No amount of time can change that.
I look forward to the day, that I can call you my friend.
So no matter what, see you later, forever.
2006-09-26 18:21:41 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
wow... *sniff sniff* that's so awesome...
you should join http://www.deviantart.com
it's a site where you can share your art and stuff.. i dunno up to you...
that is sooooooooooooooo good...
2006-09-26 19:21:47 · answer #1 · answered by oddzilla 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good way to deal with your feelings, however I prefer to beat the hell out of people that make me feel sad. JK
2006-09-27 02:02:36 · answer #2 · answered by sophia 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
THATS GREAT!
DEEP EVEN!
can tell there is alot of emotion behind it!
GREAT JOB & GOOD LUCK!
2006-09-27 01:27:10 · answer #3 · answered by f4fanactic 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
so long to read
2006-09-27 01:45:46 · answer #4 · answered by JayHawk 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
didn't you just post this question?
2006-09-27 01:25:41 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋