So, I'm writing my personal statement for Vet. It's due in a few hours, and I still can't get the last sentence to sound anywhere near good.
At the begining I mentioned that I was first dissuaded from vet by the whole "hand up cow bum" thing, and so I want to come back to that at the end.
Including the sentence before the trouble-maker, for context, I have:
"After graduation, I see myself spending time overseas in an animal conservation project before returning to Australia to work in a small animal clinic, also caring for stray animals and injured wildlife. And perhaps the internal exploration of a cow foetus wouldn’t be so bad after all. "
Aaah, I have tried a MILLION different sentences, and none of them work. I just want to finish by saying "I'm not dissuaded by having to put my arm up a cow's behind anymore, it actually sounds kind of interesting" - but I can't get it to work properly - Help!?
2007-11-29
14:10:11
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Bianca
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