My AP English teacher has a list of "Non-negotiables" when writing.
One of these "non-negotiables" is "don't start sentences with and, but, so, well, like, or then".
The sentence I need re-worded is:
"Then, a week before the Fall-Jamboree game, I was told that I was the starter and there would be no split in playing-time."
As you can see, I started the sentence with 'Then'. I was editing my paper and noticed this, yet nothing sounds good when I try to re-word it.
Help!
2007-10-05
03:08:15
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