Homework Help - February 2007

This business letter contains 2 sentences (1 in each paragraph) which need to be rewritten.Choose 1 of these sentences explain why it doesn't fit in this type of letter & provide
replacement sentence. it has nothing to do w/ grammar
spelling or punctuation -but has to do with the tone of the
letter.)

Dear Lester Bins:

I am writing in regard to the article "Stuck in Lodi Again: The Travels of a
Fortunate Son" published by The Speckled Hen in the November 2005 issue. In
the article, author Paul Zants claims that the song "Proud Mary" is a song
written by Ike and Tina Turner. This is one of the dumbest things ever
written. "Proud Mary" is a song that was covered by Ike and Tina Turner.
However, John Fogerty originally wrote the song.

While Ike and Tina Turner have made the song their own, John Fogerty is the
man! He deserves better than to be interviewed by someone who cannot even
conduct basic background research. This is something that should be
corrected immediately.

2007-02-16 02:31:21 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous

2007-02-16 02:29:19 · 3 answers · asked by danny_9950 2

Sara, in her hurry to get home, was trying to pass the car in front of her on a two-lane road. No cars were approaching her from the opposite direction, so she merged into the other lane. Speeding up, Sara didn’t notice that a car of workers was turning off a side road and into the lane she was in. Upon impact, Sara’s car split in half. According to authorities, parts of her body were lying with in 50 ft of the wreck. She died instantaneously, leaving her family behind and her brother in eternal misery.
She had died without forgiving him. His last words to her were unkind, and now he can’t take them back. Forgiveness is all people really need, yet sometimes, fall short of having. Mohammed sat in the car to angry to speak. He wanted with all his heart to apologize and have her forgive him, but he was too late. She was now gone and he couldn’t help but wonder if maybe he did call her, would she have hurried home? Would she have switched lanes? Would she have died without forgiving him?

2007-02-16 02:25:26 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous

The business letter shown below contains two sentences (one in each
paragraph) which need to be re-written. Please choose one of these
sentences, explain why it doesn't "fit" in this type of letter, and provide
a replacement sentence. (Hint: The revision has nothing to do with grammar,
spelling, or punctuation - but instead has to do with the tone of the
letter.)




March 22, 2006


Dear Lester Bins:

I am writing in regard to the article "Stuck in Lodi Again: The Travels of a
Fortunate Son" published by The Speckled Hen in the November 2005 issue. In
the article, author Paul Zants claims that the song "Proud Mary" is a song
written by Ike and Tina Turner. This is one of the dumbest things ever
written. "Proud Mary" is a song that was covered by Ike and Tina Turner.
However, John Fogerty originally wrote the song.

While Ike and Tina Turner have made the song their own, John Fogerty is the
man! He deserves better than to be interviewed by someone who cannot even
conduct basic backg

2007-02-16 02:14:59 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous

I am looking for two features that you would see in a uncodified constitution.

2007-02-16 01:55:25 · 2 answers · asked by berthine3465 2

can you translate these sentences into English please!!!!!!!!!!!! A que hora vas a la escuela? Como vas a la escuela? En que clase estas ahora? Donde esta la profesora? Dan los miembors del club de espanol una fiesta?



they are all spanish. thank you soooo much!

2007-02-16 01:50:29 · 1 answers · asked by ps 2

2007-02-16 01:26:29 · 7 answers · asked by neverwilltalk 1

I'm doing a project for history and need to know about the Lee-Enfield Rifle. I need to know when it was invented, who invented it, when it was first used, which side of World War One used it, its effect on the war, and its overall success.

Please Help Me. I already have an F in this class...i need a good grade!

2007-02-16 01:12:22 · 6 answers · asked by annabnana76 1

I have to write a letter to the government from the perspective of a union worker for my U.S. History class. What is a union worker? Where can I get information on the internet about them? I need ideas please, thanks!

2007-02-16 00:54:31 · 2 answers · asked by Halley 3

i found this question from a SAT book, and i couldn't figure it out. so hope u guys and help me! thx a lot

A wooden block is in the shape of a rectangular prism with dimensions n cm, (n+3) cm, and (n+9)cm, for some integer n. The surface of the block is painted and the block is then cut into 1 cm cubes by cuts parallel to the faces. if exactly half of the cubes have no paint on them, find the dimensions of the original block.

2007-02-16 00:49:53 · 1 answers · asked by yes? 2

the more, the better...

2007-02-16 00:44:03 · 5 answers · asked by katrina_vizconde 1

What does a ph scale measure? I need this for a science project.

2007-02-16 00:43:05 · 5 answers · asked by Shawty 1

- Studying life science
- In 7th grade
- Has to be interesting but can't take a long time

2007-02-16 00:33:03 · 3 answers · asked by lizzy n. 1

2007-02-16 00:25:46 · 3 answers · asked by srh_brotherton 1

2007-02-15 23:56:34 · 7 answers · asked by x_Hayley_x 2

Are ethical principles relative or subjective? Explain your position.

2007-02-15 23:44:31 · 2 answers · asked by tomdions_22 1

What to you the highest values to posses? Explain?

2007-02-15 23:42:06 · 5 answers · asked by tomdions_22 1

give some ideas to make models in architecture

2007-02-15 23:41:25 · 3 answers · asked by shruthi p 1

The article should be about 20 pages and the summary about 600 words. The topic of the article will most probably deal with a political issue! Please, advise!!Thanks

2007-02-15 23:22:35 · 1 answers · asked by mirilm 1

2007-02-15 23:15:34 · 3 answers · asked by tom d 1

plzzzzz help in my project

2007-02-15 22:09:04 · 3 answers · asked by imdbestt 2

i am making a project on sports, its history n it as a source of history..emphasizing on sports in india
plz help n give a suitable title..

2007-02-15 21:56:39 · 3 answers · asked by titan1992 2

Hi everyone, i'm need help trying to find a current issue for my oral presentation which is soon!!
i've looked on the internet, and newspapers..but then i thought of who better to ask then all the smart people on yahoo answers :P
what kind of currents issues are goin on at the moment, i know the water shortage is a HUGE one, but is there anything else like social wise (divorce rates, the abortion pill, jobs..etc)
The issue has to be from september 2006 onwards...i'm really struggling and starting to freak out!!
any help would appreciated, THANKS HEAPS!!!

2007-02-15 21:37:11 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous

an experiment in which the result is attainable for only a day...

2007-02-15 21:07:57 · 3 answers · asked by Elma E 2

continuation from : http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Am6euH9zC_9s0hWUKrY8PRXsy6IX?qid=20070216014633AAAH8nN


10. Are you aware of the side affects of smoking? (lung cancer, cancers of larynx and tongue, chronic obstructive pulmonary diseases, emphysema, and any other illnesses?)
a.Yes
b.No

11. Does smoking have any side effects on you now?

12. Do you think smoking makes you more or less attractive to other people?
a.more
b.less
c.no effect

2007-02-15 20:49:22 · 8 answers · asked by beyingnobody 2

or phrase for a school project brochure about the earth, I need a heading or catch phrase stating something to the effect of "come visit planet earth..."im up late becuz this is last minute plz help

2007-02-15 20:47:34 · 2 answers · asked by Adrian 1

2007-02-15 20:28:52 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous

Composition for penn foster....?
I have to write a composition thats five paragraphs Long..... (Describe a memorable day in your life)....
I keep tyring to start it but I am just getting stuck.....
Does anyone have any advice or mybe a copy of a compostion, I can get some Ideas from or how to start it. ( Would love an example)

2007-02-15 19:50:20 · 2 answers · asked by laura_mae83 2

i go to college

yesterday when we were peer reviewing our essays in class. it turned out that i wrote an essay that was due in april. So i wrote the wrong essay. now i have 8 hours to do it, but i want to go to sleep in that time period. Should i not do it and not sleep or should i risk it and ask her for an extension tomorrow?(the cut off date).

2007-02-15 19:28:16 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous

if y= (4x+3)^(5x+6)
what is y', if
Y' = y·[ 5*log(4*x+3) + (4*(5*x+6))/(4*x+3) ]

2007-02-15 19:23:57 · 2 answers · asked by argentina 1