Once more... could you please edit this for me! Thanks alot!?

Question

Sara, in her hurry to get home, was trying to pass the car in front of her on a two-lane road. No cars were approaching her from the opposite direction, so she merged into the other lane. Speeding up, Sara didn’t notice that a car of workers was turning off a side road and into the lane she was in. Upon impact, Sara’s car split in half. According to authorities, parts of her body were lying with in 50 ft of the wreck. She died instantaneously, leaving her family behind and her brother in eternal misery.
She had died without forgiving him. His last words to her were unkind, and now he can’t take them back. Forgiveness is all people really need, yet sometimes, fall short of having. Mohammed sat in the car to angry to speak. He wanted with all his heart to apologize and have her forgive him, but he was too late. She was now gone and he couldn’t help but wonder if maybe he did call her, would she have hurried home? Would she have switched lanes? Would she have died without forgiving him?

Answer 1

Mohammed sat in the car to angry to speak.

It should be Mohammed sat in the car to(o) angry to speak.

I'm not great at english but that's the only thing I found.

Answer 2

Sara, was trying to get home in a hurry. As she traveled on the two-lane highway, she tried to pass every car in front of her.As there were no cars in front of her, she merged into the other lane As she sped up, she didn't notice a car of workers were turning off a side road and into the lane she was in. She hit them with a hard impact,Sara's car split in half. The authorities stated that parts of her body were lying with in 50 ft. from the accident. Of course she diied instantantly, leaving her family behind. her brother is in eternal misery. His last words to her were unkind. And he can't take them back. She died without forgiving him. Although falling short of it,forgiveness is sometimes all people really need.Mohammed(her brother) sat in his car,to upset and angry to speak. He wanted very much from his heart to apologive to Sara And ask for her forgiveness. He was just too late. She is gone, and he couldn't help but wonder if maybe he had called her, would she have tried to hurry home.Would she not have sped and change lanes as she did? Would she have died with out forgiving him? This will bother Mohammed the rest of his life. He will now ask for forgiveness when he does someone wrong. And do it in memory of his beloved sister.