help me find mistakes in my essay please here it goes
A Special Day in Canada
I got to see Niagara falls this summer, and it was amazing! The water was crashing, booming, and making a cloud of steam above. First we got to see the American side of the falls which was kind of dirty, but it had great attractions. My favorite was the boat ride with my mom, dad, and little sister Jess.
Next we headed to the border once we got there, there was a man in sunglasses looking big and tough. He was the border patrol. he asked my mom and dad why we were going to canada, the name of people we were visiting, and some other questions i dont remember. After that he opened the back door and asked jess and me our name, school, and some other things to make shure we were my mom and dads kids.
Now we were in canada! which we quickly noticed it was much cleaner. I have heard Niagara falls looks so much better on the Canadian side, but it was very much the same thing. There were some...
2006-10-01
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