Okay, i've started a story about a girl, Ana, who's suicidal and depressed. She's also two-faced. At school, she's happy, once she walks through the front door of her house, she loses all of her pride. She isn't abused. Also, i have the points of view from the depressed girl, her 2 sisters, her best friend, and two guy friends. I'm hoping to have the story go from her being 14-24 or maybe older. I should've started a timeline, but i didn't and I already have 24 pages, including the names of the people when it switches points of view. It's kind of like the Blue Girl, but NOT the story, i mean when is changes points of view. i'd like your views on the story and advice on how i could keep the story going without it constantly refering back to Ana's suicidal ideation and depression. I'd also like advise on how to be a better writer and how i can improve my story even though i'm 24 pages in.
Thank you!!!!
2007-05-22
13:10:45
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demonick_chicka
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