don't complain about it not making sense because it's a part near the end but I need to know if it's good.
"Suddenly the world seemed to stand still and Lily looked up to see a wonderous sight. A strong gust of wind swept through the forest and she had to grab on to the roots of a tree and beat her wings so she wouldn't be blown away. The wind began to pick up flower petals from the ground and soon the fairy was engulfed in a tornado of whirling colors. The flowers slowed and began to shimmer with light as bright as the stars. Slowly the drifted from the sky as the wind stopped and rested on her and Jake. She gasped as the boy blinked and opened his eyes.
"You're alive!" she squealed and wrapped her tiny arms around him.
Thank you, she thought to herself for she knew why Eric had survived. It was the 'last hope magic';the magic that fufilled only your hearts strongest desire. It can only be used once, she remembered, but that doesn't matter now. We are finally safe."
2007-01-27
13:22:46
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