I am wanting to start writing childrens books. Here is one I wrote a few years ago tell me what you think. Thanks.....
LITTLE ABIGALE
ABIGALE’S CHRISTMAS WISH
Abigale wants to know,
If it will ever snow.
“Mommy why is there no snow?” she asked
“It has to do with the weather outside.” replied her mom
“When the temperature is really cold,
The rain will turn into snow.”
With this Abigale went to her room,
Where she placed a wish and hoped it would come true.
Christmas is just two weeks away,
And by her window Abigale would stay.
Then one day her mom came to Abigale’s room.
“What do you want for Christmas?” her mom asked
“I want a white Christmas” Abigale replied
“No toys, no games, no bike?” her mom asked puzzled
“Nope, all I want is a white Christmas and that’s it.” Abigale said positively
For the next week Abigale sat and waited for the snow.
But her mom just didn’t know.
2007-11-06
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