Please give comments on what you think and how i would fix it. Remember, the rhyme scheme is aabba, ccddc, eeffe, gg, and all the a's, c's, e's and g's have to have 10 syllables while the b's, d's, and f's have to have 8 syllables
To My Lovely Family
When I see my dim eyes in the mirror
Every single thing becomes much clearer
I have no life to admire
You can tell by my attire
The end of my life is getting nearer
First, good-bye, beautiful children of mine
Stephan, please stop smoking and draw the line
Make sure to take care of your bro
And don’t forget to shovel snow
Don’t fret; I’m sure all of you will be fine
Next, farewell to my fair wife, Mary-Ann
I’m leaving you with my scarlet red van
And although you might not agree
There is one thing that I must plea
A need you to kill a specific man
He makes my life a nightmare filled with loss
Who else would he be other than my boss?
2006-11-05
12:05:40
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