Can you give any suggestions on how to make it better. It's not amazing, but I still love it (like a child lolo) <3.
Good Enough
Golden days of pride and glory, now rusted to the core.
I try to find my way through life, I try but always fall.
Rancid words thrown at me, with eyes of cloudy glear,
what path shall I create, it now looks like one of tears.
Below the line of happiness, is where now I lay,
and yet I do feel good enough, Is this good enough today?
After all the glory, after all the pain,
will I settle for just average, was it all in vain?
Amazing feats I will accomplish, I'll just give it some time (?),
break away from expectations, never surrender to design!
So much is empty, so much unexplained,
And yet I do feel good enough? Good enough today.
2007-12-10
00:24:17
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