I absolutely LOVE to write, and I have my ending. I have the characters, I have a rather bleak discription of the time device. I only a senior in high school, so can anyone such as physicists, writers, book nuts or students help criticize and improve my current and future chapters? I have the first statements figured out:
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And out of no where, an explosion of titanic proportion! The scorching heat in an infinite clout burns time and space throughout, giving birth to the home of all that lives and all that dies alike. From what was once a single point is now a horde of things… that poured across the vast and future skies. Now of grand and endless size, in space and time the matters now immerse. Is now the Universe…?
Chapter 1: Thirteen Billion Years Later…
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Those who help will be an acknowledgment for sure. Please help me out, I have a LOT of ideas! The end has an AWESOME twist, too.
-Andrew
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2007-10-18
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