Coarse Absence.
Tender and empowering
Tingled chest and dew dropped eyes.
Love, thick, oozing like treacle
Sweet, warm and overflowing.
As I draw to see you my river runs from the sea.
A vast and inexhaustible supply of life and love.
I dream deep lazy dreams across the valley floor as time wanders by..
I meander round your thighs, your smell, your laugh.
Bowing back and forth now…mere days from the heady plateau.
Spring wells from deep inside almost to bursting.
Changing, eroding thrashing my banks for some greater glimpse,
A tangible touch of your fresh breath on my shoulder.
The anticipation of flurrying over your snowy ground,
I grow impatient, petulant; thrashing and bubbling.
Consuming water rending and burning with the need
To evaporate into the clouds and share a kiss with you,
my source on high.
I will be seeing my girlfriend in about a week.Weve been apart for three. Best answer to the most qualified person to give constructive criticism/ praise.
2007-03-23
13:59:32
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Danny B
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