hpow could i make these poems better?

Question

ok i was really mad, and upset one night and i wrote these poems. could you guys rate them and maybe tell me how to fix them up. I'M NOT EMO!!!!! here goes
Life sucks
your always **** outta luck
as life goes on
you lose many things
Friends, Family
love and your sanity
the ones you called friends
were they really?
or were they just using you?
the ones you thought loved you
did they really love you?
or did they play with your emotions?
when you cried, who was there?
was it your friends?
NO.
was it the ones that "loved" you?
NO.
no one was there to comfort you
so why would they be here now?
you family was the only ones who seemed to care
if you were to disapear
then they'd realize how important you were
how much they loved you
they'd even miss the nonstop talk
and the way you followed them around
yes, if you disapeared
that'd teach 'em.

I'M NOT EMO!!! i just wanna know what you guys think of it

Answer 1

How to make them better...it's by practicing. I would start with your spelling.

Answer 2

its ok but it needs to flow a little more and the topic is really the same exact thing the whole time so just fix it up a little....other than that....its pretty good