For some reason it won't let me ask any more questions on my account so I'm having my sister ask them.
Here goes:
paragraph-sentance one:
"Don't touch Frank untill I get back; if he tries to escape don't give him anything for the next few days. I'm not sure how long I'll be one. When he tries or if he tries, lock him in the basement with no food or water."
peragraph-sentance 2:
"Frank needs to be punished for what he's done. I want his brothere here to watch this."
Man #2: "Isn't Joe's kidnapping enough? Why won't you just leave them both alone?"
finally, peragraph sentance 3:
"That idiot! I'll make him pay! How DARE he try and escape!"
I'm writing a fanfiction novel, so I guess the points will go to the most creative revising, but not sure.
Btw, Sis, thanks for letting me borrow this.
2006-09-14
03:58:26
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