paragraph-sentance one:
"Don't touch Frank until I get back. If he tried(tries?) to escape, don't give him anything for the next few days. I'm not sure how long ill be gone. Please lock him in the basement but do not give him any food or water."
peragraph-sentance 2:
"Frank needs to be punished for what he's done, but I want his brother here to watch." (other person) "Isn't his brother's kidnapping enough?"
finally, peragraph sentance 3:
"That idiot! I'll make him pay! How DARE ** he try and escape!"
I'm writting a fanfiction novel called "Echos Of The Past" if any of you want to read it...
with my bro of course, its on fanfiction.net, well ten points to whoever can write these the best. good luck.
2006-09-14 03:17:47 · 9 answers · asked by dOnNa 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
IT'S NOT HOMEWORK!
It's just fanfiction...
2006-09-14 03:20:57 · update #1
I'll take a stab -- but I do agree that spelling is vital. If you have a lot of misspellings, you'll get no credibility from readers. Anyway, without knowing what your book is about, here's my best effort:
#1
"Trust me, Frank's gonna try and escape, so I don't want you anywhere near him. Just leave him locked in the basement. No food, no water. Nothing. I'll be back in a few days."
(Side note -- Of course, you should realize that no water for three days will leave Frank near death...)
#2
"Frank deserves what he's getting. Even better, he needs his brother here to enjoy the show."
"Kidnapping isn't enough? Man, you're cold."
#3
"Frank's an idiot! Escape, huh? If he thought things in there were bad, just wait and see how much fun he'll have now!"
2006-09-14 03:35:01 · answer #1 · answered by CapnPen 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Without knowing what your char. are like....
1. " Leave Frank alone till I get back. If he tries to escape, throw in the basement without any food or water"
2. "Frank needs to be punished for what he has done. Get his brother out of here, I don't want him to see this"
"Hasn't his [brother's name] been through enough. His brother has been kidnapped"
3. "Son of a b***! He will pay for what he has done. How dare he try to escape"
Hope that helps it was difficult to rewrite without knowing the situations.
2006-09-14 03:29:33 · answer #2 · answered by Elle 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are not the little girl that was locked in a basement for 10 years in Germany are you?!?!?
Just kidding, keep writing it is a wonderful thing!
Good luck on your novel
2006-09-14 03:25:36 · answer #3 · answered by reevesfarm 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I went to the keep to purchase some steak sauce, yet on the way i spotted an out of place eyebrow hair, so i took my tweezers to pluck it out yet lost my interest on the line, ran over a huge piece of glass and popped a tire.
2016-12-12 08:17:31 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I can't. But good luck on your novel.
2006-09-14 03:21:15 · answer #5 · answered by Twiggy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you should learn to spell before you ask us to do your homework
2006-09-14 03:19:24 · answer #6 · answered by mannit m 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What the hell did Frank DO????
2006-09-14 03:54:30 · answer #7 · answered by kitten lover3 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
what three sentences do you need to word
2006-09-14 03:37:04 · answer #8 · answered by ? 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Please use the spell check if you can't spell.
2006-09-14 03:20:10 · answer #9 · answered by claire 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋