i love to wright poetry but i reely suck at it cause i reely dont know what the heck my poems mean i just wright things down.i'll give you part of my poem that i wrote in memory of my friend this is the only poem i actually wrote that makes sense...be honest of what you think of my poem please( darkness has fallen. my voice hurts from callin,out but you can no longer hear me. theres not a star in the sky ,for me to look up to and though i keep crying i try so hard not to. but my friend is no longer here with me. its dark all around me .i try soo hard but i cant see no body not one person i'm swearing and i'm cursing. i'm so sick of this dark place and i wish that one more time i could see your smiling face shining as bright as the sun)well....... what do you think ??it's not the whole thing and i probably forgot a few parts please be honest...and that was my best poem i ever wrote when i find my other ones i'll put them up and you'll see how crappy they are..
2006-11-07
09:33:52
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frostbit beauty
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