Cold, filmy drops of water fell steadily from the rusty faucet. The constant beat of them hitting the porcelain basin was rhythmic, like a pianist keeping time on a metronome. A stagnant pool of liquid had been slowly collecting in the sink for days; the leaky faucet had not been serviced in much longer than that.
Off in the far corner of the bathroom there lay a cracked shampoo bottle, its contents spilled and drying on the cheap linoleum tile. This bathroom scene screamed panic. Something wasn't right here. In fact, nothing had been right since that God-awful night several days ago...
Where do I go from here? I dont want to include anything with rape or like a teen missing her boyfriend or anything to that effect. I want it to be profoud, and good.
ideas!
2006-10-13
09:03:10
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