I'm a Taiwanese and our teacher told us to write an English diary, so I'm wondering can you please help me? Use your way of writing my diary or check if is there any grammar , spelling , phrase that is wrong! I can give you 10 points if you did a good job! You can change or add many dificult or funny words in my diary, make my diary more interesting, and make my diary sound more like Amricans.
Dear Diary,
I read a book called a series of unfortunate events. That book was fantastic! I had 12 volumes of them, and I know that that 13 book will be coming out on oct.13, same as the day when the movie Stormbreaker is coming out. I’m so exited. And today my father told me if I’m good, he will buy me any thing I want for the next week, so I have to control myself for this week. I have to be really good, I will not scream or shout this week with my mom! Hee! hee!
2006-09-09
16:36:59
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