I'm a Taiwanese and our teacher told us to write an English diary, so I'm wondering can you please help me? Use your way of writing my diary or check if is there any grammar , spelling , phrase that is wrong! I can give you 10 points if you did a good job! You can change or add many dificult or funny words in my diary, make my diary more interesting, and make my diary sound more like Amricans.
Dear Diary,
I read a book called a series of unfortunate events. That book was fantastic! I had 12 volumes of them, and I know that that 13 book will be coming out on oct.13, same as the day when the movie Stormbreaker is coming out. I’m so exited. And today my father told me if I’m good, he will buy me any thing I want for the next week, so I have to control myself for this week. I have to be really good, I will not scream or shout this week with my mom! Hee! hee!
2006-09-09 16:36:59 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Dear Diary,
I read a volume of books called "A Series of Unfortunate Events." The books were fantastic! I have 12 volumes of them and I know that the 13th book will be coming out on Oct.13, the same day the movie, Stormbreaker, is coming out. I’m so exited.
Today, my father told me that if I’m good, he will buy me any thing I want for the next week; so I have to control myself for this week. I have to be really good. I will not scream or shout at my mom this week! Hee-hee!
2006-09-09 16:46:47 · answer #1 · answered by adrift feline 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I read a book called A Series of Unfortunate Events. That book was fantastic! I have 12 volumes of them, and I know that that book #13 will be coming out on Oct.13, the same day as the movie Stormbreaker comes out. I’m so exited! And today my father told me that if I’m good, he will buy me anything I want next week, so I have to control myself this week. I have to be really good, I will not scream or shout this week at my mom! Hee! hee!
2006-09-09 23:41:07 · answer #2 · answered by Janiffer 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dear Diary,
I read a book called A Series of Unfortunate Events. The book was fantastic! I have 12 volumes of the series, and a I know that the 13th book will be coming out Oct. 13th, same day as the movie Stormbreaker comes out.Today I was told by my father that if I'm good, he'll buy me anything I want for the week, so i have to control myself throughout the week. I have to be really good, I will not argue with my mom. Hee! Hee!
2006-09-09 23:43:46 · answer #3 · answered by Kris 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I agree with Jannifer, but the word "exited" should be "excited."
I also think I would change the way you talk about having 12 volumes. I think I would say that the book comes in 12 volumes, (so far), and I have all 12, with another one coming out soon (number 13).
2006-09-09 23:43:32 · answer #4 · answered by Wayne A 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
u can go online n search 4 a tution teacher
2006-09-09 23:43:39 · answer #5 · answered by doglover.cathater 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋