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The Dine College parking lot was once nicely paved with no pot holes, dips, and bumps. People use to get into their vehicles and go, instead of slowing down for pot holes and dips. Today, however, the paved parking lot has changed dramatically by growing pot holes, dips, bumps, and cracks where rain and access water runs through them. People now have to slow down at each pot hole while they are driving on a bumpy road with holes. It is now time to make this parking lot nicely paved again. The Dine College parking lot needs to be fixed and be more improved.
There are several reasons why the parking lot needs to be fixed. First, there are pot holes, dips, and cracks that keep on forming and growing bigger. This needs to be stopped and be fixed.
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2006-07-31
08:40:36
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