Thanks to everyone who replied to my previous question.I would like your honest opinion about this poem I wrote,please.
A Letter
Dear Girl,
I thought I should tell you
I am very full today-so much so that there is quite a space constraint--
with all sorts of feelings jostling for my attention.
I am feeling tugs all the time
whenever he is coming into your sight
I wonder why?
Anyways, maybe you should know-
it is becoming rather uncomfortable
if you transmit confused signals all the time
I am sending smiles to your face at most unlikely times—
sometimes with tears, even.
And you know, I almost turned over with joy
when he called you ‘beautiful’.
So, if you see I am a little dysfunctional today
its not entirely my fault, you know who to blame.
With love,
Your heart.
2007-01-09
05:48:33
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