She was a metaphor
a thought
carefully crafted
in the minds of the willing.
In my life
I saught after her
paid a price far too extravagant to mention
and yet she still evades me.
She was a hope
a giggle released from the lips
of a sleeping child
during the storms of life
and so I wait for her
Imagine her
consecrate my flesh for her
until she is attained
She is love.
2007-01-09 10:50:35 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
I love your deepness and your poetic energy. Oh, I know you have some really deep sensual feelings inside of you in a way that you can only express thoroughly through writing. I am the same way. Keep writing.
2007-01-09 10:55:06 · answer #1 · answered by Weasel Girl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very deep, sensual and emotional! From one poet to another...love it!!! Not sure what the argument was about since you didn't say. But I personally think its a great piece of work and you should be darn proud of it!
2007-01-09 14:41:25 · answer #2 · answered by mysweetluvie 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really really love it! It's an amazing poem and I love your deepness.
2007-01-09 11:50:57 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very talented....go enter a contest...http://www.poetry.com
2007-01-09 11:50:15 · answer #4 · answered by sunflare63 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad. Not bad at all.
Why did you get in an argument about it?
2007-01-09 10:57:59 · answer #5 · answered by Bob 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
roses am red
violets be blue
i reads yo poem
and throwed up
lol
just kidding, it was cool
2007-01-09 12:08:40 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
i like it
2007-01-09 10:57:36 · answer #7 · answered by xxxmorbid_vampirexxx 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋